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Witnessed Weakness
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:09:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm losing my chance
To something worthless
I have a choice
Why do I take that
Something that will end soon
Or a chance at a future change
Death is certain
My self-determined demise
I feel numb
I know I'm making a bad choice
There's still a chance to change
Yet still I choose
The same
Knowing the consequences
I take a stand
For my decision
My conscious
Ignorant thoughts
I am walking
Into the blades of a fan
Shredding myself knowingly
The highest degree
Of weakness ever witnessed
Copyright ©
desireemiote
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2004-03-26 10:09:12]
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Re: Witnessed Weakness
(User Rating: 1 )
by dreamerboy1616 on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 01:36:11 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: Witnessed Weakness
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by bridie on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:44:09 PM AEST
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| I like its rythm |
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