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Kill me Now
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:26:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Kill me Now
I feel you tiptoe through my skull,
through the blackness,
as I fall
so kill me now
and be done with it,
so done with thee,
I can taste the *****
from when you were me
but still your hand is down my throat,
your erotica, my skin
is blood and burning from your sweat,
my subconcious lust for sin...
so kill me now
Please let me go,
please let me be,
my tormented mind surrounds.
Black slime drips from my tongue,
I know,
your knowledge knows no bounds
YOU KNOW YOU HAVE ME
kill me now
and let me be at peace
When my skull finds fragmentation,
only then I'll find release.
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2004-03-26 03:26:59]
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Re: Kill me Now
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by Jolly on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:04:52 AM AEST
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Just a comment about your comment before the poem...its hilarious because I just posted a poem about dropping my computer out a 6 story window...LOL
great you remembered.... |
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Re: Kill me Now
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:17:39 AM AEST
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| yeah? and i just posted a comment about the computer one and now this one lol.......yeah....i know the feeling, i live with it everyday but let me tell ya, psyche wards are no fun at all. with 4 attempts on my record the hospistals never leave me alone...so dont do that, which is my point |
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Re: Kill me Now
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by silent on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:15:20 AM AEST
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LMFAO, i guess your computer is ***** you off, lol. Great write though,
love it.... :) |
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Re: Kill me Now
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 10:03:29 AM AEST
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| LMFAO....loved the comment you made before the poem. My computer can be a real ***** sometimes too. On to the poem: for some reason, it strikes me as erotic in a twisted way. Either way, it's sublime. Congrats. |
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Re: Kill me Now
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:31:05 PM AEST
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| hey, great write, very powerful. hehe. i guess you comp is an a** tho...? its good that you remembered this. luv n hugs, phil xxx |
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