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My Psyche
Contributed by
thumper
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:25:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I'm a little off......you see
But I don't dare let me be me
I've got too much responsibility
I see no break in sight for me.
I'm a little off......you see
Responsibility's driving me crazy!
I try to run more and more each day
But I won't let me leave!
I'm a little off......you see
Responsibility won't let me flee
I try to stay......
I try to leave......
It's really quite a quandry!
'CAUSE......
I'm....a little......off
you see.
Copyright ©
thumper
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2004-03-26 03:25:40]
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Re: My Psyche
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by Jolly on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:01:13 AM AEST
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| know the feeling...had my two since they were babys. I have a shirt that says " I keep hitting escape but I'm still here."...great write! short...cute..meaningful...thanks. |
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Re: My Psyche
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:19:00 AM AEST
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| keep on going....thats all i can say other than i like the way you put the words together, it makes it good to read |
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Re: My Psyche
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by venkat on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:19:42 AM AEST
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| Yea..responsibilities won't let us flee..this is well done. venkat |
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Re: My Psyche
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by moon_light on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:44:32 AM AEST
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good one i know this a hard time for you and even worse now but you will be fine and your the most sane person i know g2g bye
love jen |
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Re: My Psyche
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:53:22 AM AEST
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| short, sweet, and to the point. I like it, thumps. |
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Re: My Psyche
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:24:20 PM AEST
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This was a cute write. Cheers!
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