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Can you hear me now?
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:09:43 AM in AEST
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Have you ever felt like your heart is breaking,
And you can no longer mend it.
Then you don't know how to end it.
Have you ever felt hollow inside,
And can no longer fill it.
Then you realize your not worth this life.
Have you ever felt like sitting down and crying,
And you cry but have no tears left.
Then at that moment you know you'd rather die.
Have you ever loved someone so much you feel as if you'd die without them,
And you realize at that moment death would be much kinder.
Then at that moment you know no one would attend your funeral.
Have you ever felt deserted to the point that you feel not even God is there,
And no one can hear you scream?
Then if you do you know my pain and maybe you can hear my screams.
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2004-03-26 01:09:43]
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Re: Can you hear me now?
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by badlander on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:49:33 AM AEST
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I hear you. It will get better. Take control and make it happen. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
tony |
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Re: Can you hear me now?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:31:45 AM AEST
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| yeah.....feel like that all the time, but can you hear me now? how bout now? lol everything you say sounds like a vowel! what? lol |
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Re: Can you hear me now?
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by CeruleanScreams on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:53:40 PM AEST
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this is an awesome write, it really depicts raw emotions, that obviously you (as well as many others, myself included) feel. i can totally relate, and i appreciate you putting into words these feelings. one way to be heard is to write poetry.
p.s. crying doesn't help too much :~( |
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