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Why me?
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:41:51 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Long, long ago when I was a girl
I cried my little heart for reasons unbeknown
I thought it may be normal, I thought i was just scared
I thought the pain was numbing, but how little did I know
My thoughts became delusions, my life a hopeless wreck
My prayers not yet been answered, my mind not yet set free
I feel no more desire, and no more sympathy.
And yet I struggle onward for reasons unbeknown
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-03-26 00:41:51]
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Re: Why me?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:52:41 AM AEST
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A warm welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net....
This was extremely well done....It flowed so beautifully.... and had a good message...
Hope to see lots more soon..
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Re: Why me?
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by badlander on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:05:07 AM AEST
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Excellent, and I agree "The first step is..., the first step." Keep on pluggin'!
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Re: Why me?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:09:09 AM AEST
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thats really pretty....i cant write like that...not that good atleaste lol
....keep writing...
--Rianne Ashleigh |
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Re: Why me?
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:58:40 AM AEST
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| so sad but inspiring excellent message:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Why me?
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:02:34 AM AEST
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WOW,WHAT A POEM! YOU WROTE IT FROM PAST TO PRESENT-VERY IMPRESSIVE!! YOU WRITE REALLY GOOD!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Why me?
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:31:49 PM AEST
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And you proceed with grace! Strong poem with a strong message enveloped in it.
Hur |
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Re: Why me?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:53:23 AM AEST
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Please keep struggling because at the end of the struggle you will have become a stronger wiser person. No one promised us a perfect life. We got life and it is up to us, individually, to make it what we want. Choose a path, be strong, put one foot in front of the other until you get to where you want to go. Worked for me, it should work for you too. You will be what you want to be!
Hugs and rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: Why me?
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:51:08 PM AEST
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Keep dreaming! Hope is what keeps you going. I't good that you have that hope.
Welcome! It's nice to have you here! I'll be reading more of your works!
Take care.
David |
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