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Under The Sea
Contributed by
Xenia
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:31:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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the sea
the sea
look at me
under the sea
there is no bee
like me
look at Nemo
he is fishing in the sea
Dory goes snorkelling in the sea
with no bee in the sea
just like me
and Marlin then gets the Bee
By Xenia (age 9)
21st March 2004
Copyright ©
Xenia
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2004-03-26 00:31:09]
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Re: Under The Sea
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:44:42 AM AEST
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Another good version, Princess..... and I can't wait till your limerick is posted :>)
Keep on writing, Sweetie...
Lots of Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Under The Sea
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:06:53 AM AEST
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You have a very good rhyming scheme here. I enjoyed reading it. Give us more.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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Re: Under The Sea
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by Mick_Puttock on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:48:30 AM AEST
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:) well done sweetness, I hope you keep writing, and never stop. I am glad I get to have a preview of each as you do them.
Dad
(Ps. I also needed a poem to test comments on, and since my daughter has started writing, what better place than here!) |
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Re: Under The Sea
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:00:10 AM AEST
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dear xenia, this is great! i love both versions of your beautiful poem! keep writing kiddo:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->-
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Re: Under The Sea
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by Kie on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:15:53 PM AEST
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I'm thinking you like the movie--"Finding Nemo?"
If so I LOVED that movie. I wonder which character you would like to be if you could? Anyway, your poem was so wonderful to read. Just keep on writing, every chance you get and you are going to be a great poetess. Kie |
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