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Murderous Sun
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:26:39 PM in AEST
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Murderous Sun
The pouring rain falls
The graying clouds slowly bleed
The sun murders rain
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essentially9
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2004-03-25 23:26:39]
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Re: Murderous Sun
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by JennyFruFru on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:44:12 AM AEST
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| It shows the vicious cycle of life itself... such simple words can be really deep and vivid. Nice work! :) |
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Re: Murderous Sun
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by badlander on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:08:32 AM AEST
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HAIKUDO'S to you!! Nice job.
tony |
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Re: Murderous Sun
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by venkat on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:16:16 AM AEST
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Clouds are murdered thats why they bleed..
venkat |
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Re: Murderous Sun
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:35:09 AM AEST
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| i believe i can see the rainbow, beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Murderous Sun
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by a_bear on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:41:00 AM AEST
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| I love haiku...well done...but the sun just ....oh I don't know does a magic act. makes the rain vanish...don't make my beautiful sun a murderer....pweese???? Lol |
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Re: Murderous Sun
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 01:22:22 PM AEST
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| One of the best Haikus I've seen. It's circular. |
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