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Dangerous Driving
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:24:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I saw the danger, I saw the signs
but not my lane marked with lines
Night has fallen the hour is late
Undoing my belt, I accelerate
In my rear view my life will flash
check my mirrors, I wont crash
All the turnings pass me by
adrenaline my fuel, I know not why
I drift towards the central line
out of control, this exits mine
Im racing at speed its so unreal
my vision blurred, I lose the wheel
I cant see through these blinding tears
the road my path, I find each gear
The wind is rushing the tyres hot,
there passes another sign!
I cant look back I missed that chance,
now going for the redline,,,
With eyes closed and a tilted head
I breathed those words...
Now im dead..
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2004-03-25 22:24:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dangerous Driving
(User Rating: 1 ) by bernard on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:40:14 AM AEST (User
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Good interesting write something different from the usual poems we see. Thanks from bernard. |
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Re: Dangerous Driving
(User Rating: 1 ) by Juliet on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:46:44 PM AEST (User
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How sad!
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