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Lifetime Friends
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:44:19 PM in AEST
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Lifetime Friends
Do you understand what I have done?
Do you see the reasons why?
It’s all because of guilt
When you looked him in the eye
I’m the reason you know it
The reason you feel so bad
And that’s not what love should be
It should be joyous and not sad
You said to me twice
A good person you want to be
And so I thought it right to go
And allow your guilt to flee
Yes I know you love me
Of that I‘m satisfied
And you know I love you too
For many times I’ve testified
And by this you know I love you
For I placed your heart above my own
And return to the life
I have always known
But it pleases me greatly
To know I’ve sacrificed for you
And someday you will see
Indeed my love is true
Now go look into his eyes
Not with guilt but loving invitation
Rekindle the love once you shared
With longing and adoration
My love will always be yours
On that you can depend
But in its proper place
The place of a friend
Russ
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:54:11 PM AEST
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Gosh this made me cry and choke up.
It was beautiful, unselfish and touched me to my core.
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:59:52 PM AEST
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dearest russ, this is so heart breaking, unconditional love at its finest, simply beautiful, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:06:16 PM AEST
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You sir are a true gentleman...and a loving soul ...she is lucky to have known you and your love...
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:11:01 PM AEST
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OMG!!! Ditto to all the above!! WOW!!!!
Hugs
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:16:20 AM AEST
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An extremely magnanimous gesture on your part. Not sure I could be that unselfish. You are a good soul.
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by addie on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:28:43 AM AEST
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superb.... been there done that .. but never been able to put it across in such splendin words .... you are too goood .... u can add one more into ur fan list. ..
look forward to more of them ......
take care
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:35:56 AM AEST
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Excellent piece. The humility, so often ignored these days, is refreshing. And I love the author's notes. Profound concept.
Namárië
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Re: Lifetime Friends
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:40:29 PM AEST
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WoW Russ This Was So Beautiful
Very Touching Made Me Cry Reading It.
Excellect ,Beautiful,Amazing Write.
Keep Up The Good Work.
I Just Love Reading Your Wonderful Poems
{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}
,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,, |
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