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Eternal Friendship
Contributed by
Soulless
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:18:16 PM in AEST
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Ok This poem/lyrics was dedicated to my best friend Ive know my whole life. Her grades were reaching rock bottom and she was getting grownded continuously. She then got sick with a nasty cold and lost her dog. All in about 2 weeks. She always enjoyed my poetry so here is for our "Eternal Friendship"
Here we stay together
Lasting here forever~
This friendship falls much deeper than you know
Cutting deep behind our history
Lovely now once it began to grow
There to stay and always will be
There may be thorns and stubbles along the way
But this friendship wasnt made for all to show
Discern the silent smile we each portray
Letting off our captivating glow
Sharing bond of eternal friendship
Time may come when it can unravel
Love will heal the places broken
Time had come when our love fell
Strength would pick us up again
This friendship falls much deeper than you know
Cutting deep behind our history
Lovely now once it began to grow
There to stay and always will be
There may be thorns and stubbles along the way
But this friendship wasnt made for all to show
Discern the silent smile we each portray
Letting off our captivating glow
Sharing bond of eternal friendship
Tell me you will need me through depression
See me throught in this heavy burdon
I believe in you to walk me through the storm
And when I am lonely you shall stand before me
I need you here to keep me safe and warm
And when I need to face my own reflection
Cure it with this love in any shape or form
I should have told you when you were there beside me
I should have thanked you when I had the chance
Your roots will always hold within me
Ill never forget our memorable past
It will always shine down upon us
Now its my turn to cure these opened wounds
Help you up with our love in any shape or form
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-03-25 21:18:16]
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Re: Eternal Friendship
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by blueheart on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:59:46 PM AEST
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| You summed up true friendship very well. |
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Re: Eternal Friendship
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:17:59 AM AEST
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this is truely beautifully written from your heart, and soul, the unconditional genuine love of a friend is a rare precious gift, you are blessed:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Eternal Friendship
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:26:19 AM AEST
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hey i understand about that whole even in death thing....you still deserve comments on your other poetry and all that so im gonna get to the point, good write and keep it up
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Re: Eternal Friendship
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:53:21 AM AEST
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very good poem your lucky to have such a close friend as this... or rather you both are lucky to have each other. I wish I had a friend as close as this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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