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Murder
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:37:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There are blood stains
on his hands,
from a murder that never
should have been.
His jealousy and rage
got the best of him,
he murdered
the only person,
that cared and
understood him.
The tormented soul
that remains is his
and his alone,
he tries to wash
the blood off his hands,
but it won't come off.
The only way
to get rid of
the dried up blood,
is to take
his own life.
His life slowly drains away,
he will never
murder again.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.9/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-03-25 20:37:43]
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Re: Murder
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:28:50 PM AEST
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| chilling cynthia, excellent ending:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Murder
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:09:52 PM AEST
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| Great poem!!! That was your first dark one? I'm impressed! It was pretty damn good! I loved it! ;) You expressed the emotions very well. |
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Re: Murder
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:09:39 AM AEST
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Wow, Cynthia...you sent chills up my spine with this one... Good write.... keep them coming..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Murder
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:20:24 AM AEST
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The diversity of your work is immense. Not what I would have expected from you. Well written.
Rita |
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Re: Murder
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by arden on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:56:50 PM AEST
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this was awesome! really really chilling. loved it!
Arden |
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Re: Murder
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:34:29 AM AEST
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Very well said.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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