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Tears
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A single tear
falls down her cheek,
she cries for a love
that was never
meant to be.
Her heart is filled
with so much sorrow,
she waits by the window,
in her flanel nightgown
for her love to show.
Her soul feels empty
and so alone,
she cries
wishing he'd come home.
Tears
of sadness she cries,
waiting for her love
to come out from
the darkness of night.
Her heart breaks more
wih each passing second,
still she cries
for a love,
that was never
meant to be.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.9/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-03-25 20:28:32]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tears
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:41:45 PM AEST
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| Keep it up and you are going to make me cry. Wow I really felt for the woman in this poem. So sad. Kie |
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Re: Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:42:17 PM AEST
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oh cynthia, this is so filled with loneliness, beautiful in the tears, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tears
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:51:23 PM AEST
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this is so sad!........theres alot of pain in this poem..but stay strong!
luv always |
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Re: Tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:12:02 AM AEST
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So sad, but so well written.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:22:42 AM AEST
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Very nice write, my friend. You are dancing all over the poetic field. Keep on trying your wings, you are doing well.
Rita |
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Re: Tears
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by arden on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:55:35 PM AEST
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ok im about to cry lol that was so sad.. :(
so well written. good work i love this.
Arden |
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Re: Tears
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:08:28 AM AEST
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This Is Very Sad I'm On That Strong Erge Of Crying.
Very Emotional , Very Touching To Ones Soul.
Great Write ...
{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}
,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,, |
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Re: Tears
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by swiftsouljah on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 08:39:02 PM AEST
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well other than the girl and the night gown... thats how i feel
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