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Darkened Moths
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:18:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The moths, they will not leave your sight
They flitter there, in the way, in the light
And upon their dirty wings lie disgrace and shame
And so they are caught, and burnt in the flame
Ashes fall from their broken existence
See the star-dust fall into the distance
Don't pity them, for they were nothing, and they're no longer here
(Their pain persevered, and death became all too clear)
You do not miss them, this is what you wanted from the start
But how does it feel now that you've ripped them apart?
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Re: Darkened Moths
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:47:50 PM AEST
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dearest charlotte, im not sure what your last two lines mean; who do the moths symbolize? your first 8 lines though i find enchantingly beautifully written, i know there is more here than i am seeing and im going to read it again lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Darkened Moths
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:56:01 PM AEST
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| I thought it was a great poem to read but quite mysterious to me. Kie |
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Re: Darkened Moths
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by arden on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:34:49 PM AEST
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interesting. i like how it all flows. really beautiful write. good work yet again.
your friend,
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Re: Darkened Moths
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 01:18:26 AM AEST
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| This was so beautiful... somehow! I kept reading it over and over and I didn't get tired of it at all. There is some deep meaning behind the shadows of your symbolizm... or is there nothing there at all but burnt wings? |
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