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Brave Knight XLI
Contributed by
ramfire
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:59:49 PM in AEST
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Canto IX
The Sire of Playston Manor oaken beamed
with shield of blazon leopard gold on high
was raised in heather Playston's green and seemed
blessed having eyes blue like the azure sky.
Stephanus Marcus valient knight drew nigh
to Liege Duke Morley's prancing steed in line.
At Walderdeen large Castle Throme doth lie.
In Throme's majestic Great Hall they would dine.
A banquet feast for Morley waits at late hour nine.
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Re: Brave Knight XLI
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:11:18 PM AEST
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Ok. I'm ignorant of your Brave Knight series, so I decided to click-on and take a looksee what its all about.
You write with good structure and specific detail. Is this a historical-based poem? If not, then I commend your imagination, as this has past, present and future tense included.
Very good write . . . |
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Re: Brave Knight XLI
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by Stitch on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:21:14 PM AEST
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I'm ignorant too, but this is fascinating and well written. Nice work, Sir Ramfire.
Stitch |
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Re: Brave Knight XLI
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:26:45 AM AEST
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I'm Very Ignorant Also But I Know
A Great Write When I See One
And This Is One Of Em.
Awesome Totally Great .
Loved It.
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}
,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,, |
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Re: Brave Knight XLI
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:54:27 PM AEST
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| I've read a couple of these and I loved them. At times, I wish I could write like this. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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