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his girl doesn't know? part 2!
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:30:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One more glance I will dare to make
One last kiss i shall dare to take
I know this habbit soon must break
It aint something i want to shake
To give up someone I adore
To now say no forever more
Push him away may be the cure
But i no from him my heart's not pure
Didn't let go, didn't say no
Two crimes that i am bound to show
But now i must, him I will throw
Behind my life, to always go
We once did love, that time has past
Now i know, this feeling wont last
To give you up, for good maybe
For that is the choice, you left me
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Re: his girl doesn't know? part 2!
(User Rating: 1 ) by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:55:05 PM AEST (User
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Poetic bliis caught up in a madness of emotion and life and its expressed so well, you captivate the reader into your feeling and leave them standing on the edge of eternity waiting for your next piece truely something we all hope to achieve, you know im also always here for you, and dont worry about 'the weight' you put on my shoulders, their pretty big shoulders, and someone with a pretty big heart, i hope
magnificent write one can only pray to even come close too
Luke xxxx
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