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Withen The Embers
Contributed by
ItsRayningTonite
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:40:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A fire burns within the ember
A love I try not to remember
Still, The fire burns true
I guess I'll never get over you
The ashes I try to leave behind me
Scattered them throughout the city
It never leaves me alone
The fact that I'm on my own
An icey wind always chills my spine
A love I called, That once was mine
The cold; so deep and blue
I guess I'll never get over you
A whisper so loud; it will never soften
I think of your face, so very often
I don't think you even know
How hard it is not to show
When you lay with her; do you ever
Remember when you promised me forever?
The tears I cry don't cease
My torment only seems to increase
And still you keep trying to deny
The way you make me feel inside...
A rose has shed its one last petal
A pain so sharp, like broken metal
I guess I'll never know what to do
I guess I'll never stop loving you...
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ItsRayningTonite
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2004-03-25 17:40:59]
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Re: Withen The Embers
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:56:57 PM AEST
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| Hello and welcome to YPDC. Lots of pain and sadness in this poem. I hope it gets easier for you soon. I enjoyed reading this and thought it was good, thank you for sharing it with us. Kie |
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Re: Withen The Embers
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by Justalady on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:41:27 PM AEST
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| Sadness and almost despair. Words written almost as though there were not even tears left... perhaps only my view. |
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Re: Withen The Embers
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:18:42 PM AEST
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| beautiful, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Withen The Embers
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 01:35:39 PM AEST
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Very sad poem but amazingly written! Enjoyed reading it!
Anne :D |
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