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A Man Who Understands
Contributed by
GG
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:34:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In one breath you are telling me
you love me more and more...
The next thing your telling me
there is the door go.
I don't understand my love,
you hold in the palm of your hand
but for your love comes so many demands.
You start yelling at me
if I do not comply with your commands.
My love what is it you don't understand?
I can't stand it when you repremand!
So sadened into solitude and dying inside.
Taking of my love seems to flow
on your time waves of tide.
I just want to love you, you know,
be the very best that I can be.
Please just see inside of me Dougie,and let our future grow.
In all I ask of you is acceptance of me
and let all ridicules battle fall.
Copyright ©
GG
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2004-03-25 15:34:10]
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Re: A Man Who Understands
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by apollo on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:36:50 PM AEST
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| that is ever so beautiful. im sure dougie will like it. i hope you can work things out because you sound meant to be. best of wishes! |
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Re: A Man Who Understands
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:37:32 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Everything comes in time, and in time he may come to respect you. |
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