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Hello Peace
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:45:59 PM in AEST
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Goodbye to chaos
deafening silence bringing
Calm Serenity
~*~
Copyright ©
jackee_line
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:49:55 PM AEST
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You've said it so well here!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:51:23 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I wish I could write so much fill
in so little words. |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:16:09 PM AEST
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| very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 08:30:42 AM AEST
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Wow. I love thought-provoking deep haiku's!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:54:53 PM AEST
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| Such a big picture for so little words. Nicely done for a haiku. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Chade on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:40:15 PM AEST
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Thank you. I found this poem very calming. If only it could be put into practise.
Harry |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:56:43 AM AEST
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This is just how I feel when I get rid of the kids for a day. lol
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:30:47 PM AEST
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So much inspiration you transfer to me in such a short poem.
Hello peace my oldest friend
To you I simply extend a hand
Climb on up, please don't falter
In prayer I kneel, an earthly alter
On and on and on...
That is the great thing about great poetry it inspires others to write.
Thank you!
Kie |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 05:47:23 AM AEST
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Deafening silence is a rather loud thing with a rather small voice.
Well written, well said.
Take care!
David |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Thivanka on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:57:27 AM AEST
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Wow, Just two lines but gripped my heart. Words so true!
-Thivanka |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:49:54 AM AEST
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I love that thought deafening silence. this is beautiful.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 05:21:43 AM AEST
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| Simply beautiful. venkat |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 07:02:50 PM AEST
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Simply Wonderful !! I Enjoyed These Few Lines !!!
You've Done Well On This One :-)Keep Em Coming !!!
Hugs,Love & God Bless
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: Hello Peace
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 07:04:07 PM AEST
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Thanking you so much for nice comments on my poem Jackie....I love your saying.....Hate teaches us love. I was abused all my life (at home) I did just the opposite of what they did to me, and ended up being very loving.
I love your Haiku here
It's simply exquisite delight of peace!
Poetic hugs
lovingcritters
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Re: Hello Peace
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by Lilly-Quill on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 05:27:23 PM AEST
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Your personification of Peace is awesome.
There are many 'Drama Queens, and Kings, who use chaos to escape, rather than setting the stage for Peace and Serenity. Actually, Righteousness and Peace are mates; symbolically, also, a plumbline in the kingdom of God.
“Goodbye to chaos, deafening silence, bringing calm Serenity.”
This is profoundly brilliant!
~*~ Lilly-Quill~*~ |
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