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DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:37:28 AM in AEST
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"DEATH IS OUR ENEMY!!!
It matters not what we did
before he drew his last breathe.
It takes our mind years to
accept their death or bequeath.
For death is mankind's enemy
Learning to accept it and agree!
Life with him cannot be relived
Did we or didn't we?
cannot be retrieved!
Did we love them enough?
Or tell them enough times?
Were we unloving sometimes?
Why go back there? What can you change?
It will only torture you, can't rearrange.
Moments in time you did just fine.
Perfectly? Not at all!!! Human, not divine!
N'er say, "If Only?" If you could?
He'd still be here, you know he would!
Be kind to yourself now, for you're hurting.
Don't go back there, stop yourself from asking!
Death is our enemy from the very first one.
"Twil ne'r be accepted, it's our ruin!!!
Understand? Of Course they would,
And Comfort our soul?
Always remember they Loved Us!
Their gift, our peaceful knoll.
Created for my dear friend Rita
to comfort her hurting heart!
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 25, 2004
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"Life will not go on in the same way
without him, ever....If it were the same
we could only conclude that his life
meant nothing, made no contribution.
The fact that he left behind a place
that can never be refilled is a high tribute
to his uniqueness!"
"Warm Hugs to you Rita,
And never ever forget
how much he loved you
That one thought alone,
Will help you get through!"
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by Remi on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:55:52 AM AEST
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very powerful and sad but a nice write to ur freind
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:49:13 PM AEST
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| Wow so very touching & sad! Christina |
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 01:50:44 PM AEST
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very moving poem, again, im happy my hubby knew i loved him when he died and vice versa, i do believe they are around us yet, at least mine is, heh, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:51:47 PM AEST
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| Critters, this was such a powerful write. Your friend is going to like it very much. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:23:46 PM AEST
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The memories of Andy are the greatest memories that I have in my life. Our love was so deep for each other. He is truly missed by me and everyone that knew him. Thanks for writing these poems they inspire me so much. You are an excellant writer and you know how to put my feelings into words. Thanks again for being a friend.
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by venkat on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:05:21 AM AEST
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| eventhough sad..it was welldone.. venkat |
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by Stitch on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 12:12:24 PM AEST
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Acceptance is our friend. How very true. How beautifully said. You are a good and special person.
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Re: DEATH IS OUR ENEMY
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 11:55:02 PM AEST
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Thanks for sharing such a pretty poem,I need to find a friend as great as you,you truly have a beautiful heart-
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