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Into A Dolphin
Contributed by
merry
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:35:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The hour approaches
End and begin again
Infinite ocean of possibility
Perhaps I will drown
In my own ambitions
No fault of yours
I think I can swim
But I won’t know til I try
It might be too late to learn
Teeter on the edge
Wanting to jump
Morph into a dolphin
Change shape with the wind
Calling the four corners
Seeking wisdom
The hour approaches
End and begin again
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merry
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2004-03-25 10:35:05]
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Re: Into A Dolphin
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:48:02 AM AEST
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Very interesting write. I know the feeling. The anticipation strains at every word.
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Re: Into A Dolphin
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:19:30 AM AEST
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Deep and meaningful. The ending---
"Calling the four corners
Seeking wisdom
The hour approaches
End and begin again"
Gave me lots of food for thought.
I thought this was a terrific poem. Kie
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Re: Into A Dolphin
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:08:41 PM AEST
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daisy...dolphin...which ever you are you are still one hell of a writer ;o)....
You're going to be just fine, I know it :o)
Beautifully done as always
Roses
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Re: Into A Dolphin
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:07:16 PM AEST
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with each ending we find a new beginning, youll swim, and swim well, and be the spirit you were always meant to be, besides you have us swimming right along with you, huggs and love, daisy*nessa
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