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Sang another song
Contributed by
icryblacktearz
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:30:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its called a broken sorrow.
its brought with a crushed soul,
the music that is playing,
is the not such loving song,
my heart is aching long,
and all i knew is gone,
because the one that i am inlove with,
has sang another song,
you told me that you love me,
and that you are starting to like her,
but for me all is gone,
you said ill never loose you,
but i know its wrong,
that as soon as you get that kiss,
i will be long gone.
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icryblacktearz
... [
2004-03-25 10:30:18]
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Re: Sang another song
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by silent on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:39:29 AM AEST
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hmm, that hit close to home for me, all too true.
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Re: Sang another song
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by Bro on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:18:07 PM AEST
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:) hey lindz... i love you... i like the poem...
PS... i'm sorry:(
Love
Fuzzy*
**FOREVER** |
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Re: Sang another song
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 08:29:16 PM AEST
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i really like this. well written. i enjoyed it keep up the awesome work :)
Arden |
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