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Distance
Contributed by
silent
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:08:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Through darkness we walk
Distance growing like silence
Stronger with each word
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silent
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2004-03-25 09:08:46]
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Re: Distance
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:13:58 AM AEST
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| You said so much with so few words. It is like walking in the dark, distance does feel like silence and often is and it grows stronger it seems when a relationship is ending. I liked this one alot. Kie |
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Re: Distance
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:30:11 AM AEST
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I Truely Like This
Great Write .
Hope I'll Be Around
Long Enough To Read
More Of Your Wonderful
Poems.Thanks For The
Comments On Mine Also.
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,, |
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Re: Distance
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:02:44 AM AEST
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So many people throw 17 syllables on a pile and then think they've written a haiku. This is how a haiku should be. The message of this one is really deeply thought-provoking and - onfortunately - ever so true.
Keep it up!
Hur |
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