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Love=Gratitude
Contributed by
dAWn
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:03:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I saw her face
I fell from grace
It felt like dying
This sweet euthanasia she gave me
Now my heart sickly rottens
Please redeem me
Are these tears?
When you told me you’ll go away
Supplying me with new fears
Like being afraid of losing you
Your happiness is contagious
I should be put into quarantine
And although I know there’ll never be ‘us’
Forever I am thine
You brought life, you brought death to numb
What miracles can a simple ‘I like you’ do
Stood there, smiling, looked maybe a little dumb
But what is important – you smiled too
We grew into good friends
Maybe less that I would’ve wanted
I don’t want to sound greedy
Thank you for not taking me for granted
Yesterday I almost told you
You almost exposed my soul
My little/big secret, not sure if you’d like it
So I’m still hiding like a mole
Sure, someday I’ll tell you
When we’re fully grown up
I’m glad I know you
I’m glad....a lot...
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dAWn
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2004-03-25 09:03:53]
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Re: Love=Gratitude
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:36:06 AM AEST
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I feel the same way, actually. Same crush, eleven years; the feeling of being right beside someone, yet yearning to be closer, seeing them 4 inches away, but in heart 7 worlds apart. This makes me feel the same way, and that in itself is an accomplishment deserving of praise.
Compellingly done.
"Literary heretics fiddle with my rhymes; Hiding inspiration and destroying all my lines."
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Re: Love=Gratitude
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:04:11 PM AEST
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Stumbled over this one. I see 'Lyre appreciates this poem far more than I can, but I like its bittersweet message . . .
Welcome to the YPDC.
Keep posting. |
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Re: Love=Gratitude
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by jeanie on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:04:43 PM AEST
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hey dear :D
excuse my ignorance which was the reason I haven't looked you up on this site earlier!
I'm getting to like you more and more and reading your poetry helps it ;) I hope to read alot more from you :))
jeanie |
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Re: Love=Gratitude
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:12:34 PM AEST
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| oh how sweet, friends first makes a better foundation for a relationship, happiness to you, and warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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