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The Gate
Contributed by
AliB
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:56:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The gate swings open
Everybody rushes in
Heaven is now full
Copyright ©
AliB
... [
2004-03-25 06:56:06]
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Re: The Gate
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:16:25 AM AEST
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Good attempt and description.
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Re: The Gate
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by silent on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 07:59:56 AM AEST
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| straight to the point, lol. i like it. |
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Re: The Gate
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:29:57 AM AEST
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| I am clueless about Haiku but I sure enjoyed this poem. Kie |
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Re: The Gate
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:52:33 PM AEST
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| I'm not into Haikus but this was well done! Christina |
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Re: The Gate
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:09:39 PM AEST
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makes sense to me!
wildejohnny. |
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Re: The Gate
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by arden on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:51:51 PM AEST
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very good. nicely done. i liked it
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Re: The Gate
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 01:16:13 PM AEST
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| Hey, great job. It's right. 5-7-5. I liked it. It was cute. *S* Cynthia |
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