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Its Because Of Her
Contributed by
Sick_and_Twisted
on
Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 06:43:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Its because of her i hurt...
A pain like i never felt before.
A pain that would may god himself cry outloud!
Its because of her i cried...
A cry that came down 40 days and night.
My tears filled the room like a ocean
Its because of her i am here now.
Here now with this bullet in the gun.
A gun that will end all this pain.
A pain i can't stand.
Its because of her my family will cry.
They will miss me i am sure.
But the blame will still be on me.
Its because of her i am now pulling the trigger.
A trigger that will start something that the bullet will finsh.
Its because of her i am now in my grave.
A shallow grave..........
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2002-09-19 06:43:56]
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Re: Its Because Of Her
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 07:47:32 AM AEST
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ohh i hope these are only thoughts at how you were feeling and that you won't actually do this. When we lose someone we love when we gave them our all it hurts like hell. Even more so when she loves your brother. Hang in there i doubt your brother if he is with her will stay with her for long. You will find someone much better. If she is the type of woman that can betray you like that you are far better off without her. You will find true love just hang in there.
love peace and happy poetry |
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Re: Its Because Of Her
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 01:23:40 AM AEST
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| Most people could plainly see that, you could never go through with it. Your writing shows that you are a weak person, looking for sympathy. Besides most suicidle people don't write about doing it. You, like your writing seems to be nothing more than a joke |
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Re: Its Because Of Her
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 01:28:52 AM AEST
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Maybe some self reflection is needed here.
Maybe you weren't all she needed, or maybe she realized you needed someone else. It's hard to think from different view points but I think it would do you some good.
Besides, people don't fall in love on purpose it just happens, so don't be mad, it's nobody's fault really, not even yours. So smile today, smile at everything that comes your way. |
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