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my candlelight flame'
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:20:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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You run through my dreams every now and then
where are you now, do you still write by candlelight
as we sit at unknown ends, are we deeply in thought
of one another anymore at the same time?
~*~
Those whispering benches were so magical so
springtime like, so real, life was full, all was beauty
then, so long ago, is your flame still burning on midnight
oil of creativity, love and song?
~*~
Laughter shared will never be forgotten, we went
through so much you and i, laughing until we cried and
crying until we had no other option but to laugh, watching
our children become individuals,
~*~
So where are you now my friend, my old companion,
one misbegotten misunderstood word and a hurt feeling
or three and you were the one who went out for soup
and never returned to her saying you,
~*~
Would be right back, but you never did, i thought of you
today, i was going to call but i no longer have your number
because life got in the way and the puppy ate the book,
but every now and then you run through my heart,
~*~
Your eyes always ever so bright unless you were asleep
and then so was i and so it didnt matter, like yodeling
naked from the balcony in philly, so many things we did like
makinglove on a bag of kibble, made me smile,
~*~
Passions flames once graced our lips, held spellbound by your
fingertips when south street was alive, captivated, breathtakingly
so in love, wanting more, anywhere i would have flown with
you my dove, and then some,
~*~
You run through my soul every now and then
where are you now, do you still write by candlelight
as we sit at unknown ends, are we deeply in thought
of one another anymore at the same time?
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:35:16 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!!!!!! I loved it!!! This echoes something that is going on in my own life right now... your work always speaks to me!
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by venkat on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:49:25 AM AEST
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Good memories..since you have got such a friendly heart..those memories runs through your soul. lol..well done Nessa...love it
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Crys on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:07:18 AM AEST
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This was rather lovely. I was touched by the memories and heartfelt words. Your talent amazes me. keep up the good work!
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:16:34 AM AEST
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good times! i've written by candle light before it wasn't a concious desicion, we had a power cut! it certainly gives the right atmosphere. nice write.
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:33:45 AM AEST
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PRETTY NICE! IT FELT LIKE IT TOOK ALOT OF HEART TO WRITE THAT!! LOOK INTO YOUR VERY HEART,THAT IS WHERE YOU'LL FIND TRUE LOVE!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:42:00 AM AEST
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| That is beautiful, I sat and wondered about one in mine as well, and now I pray the one you think of does you that justice and is paying homage to you. Great poem. Thank you. |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:33:13 AM AEST
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Nessa,
What can I say, its nothing short of being brilliant. Your talent keeps me in awe time and time again. :) |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:50:42 AM AEST
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| This brought tears to my eyes because it was so filled with your heart. It is hard to lose someone because even though they aren't in your life your mind and heart still wants them. I haven't figured out how you delete the memories or even if its possible. It is sort of an age old question wondering if you cross the others mind. Loved this one Nessa and thought it was brilliant. Kie |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:56:30 PM AEST
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| I know this was straight from the heart thats what makes it even more special! loved it! Christina |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:25:21 PM AEST
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you sure can pull at the heart ness...this is so sad and sooo beautiful. Your pen is truly magic...sighs
Roses
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Pwei on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:14:48 PM AEST
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Nessa,
This was grrrrreat. The imagery is again so vivid! Australia won't know what has hit it! (You will love it there, I lived there for a while!)
Keep writing...
MARK |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:14:02 PM AEST
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OOO I love this one. It reminded me of old times when people write on parchement with feather quills by candlelight. So mysterious and hauntingly beautiful. I love it. Keep of the good writing!
~Soulless~ |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:50:20 PM AEST
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| Awww, this one is so moving ... you have a magic pen Nessa ... beautiful .... Jan |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:22:02 PM AEST
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wow again nessa....you catch my breath with every new word you write. ahhh, so refreshingly sweet... i love it... so great
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:45:11 PM AEST
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Awwww.... deep and touching... just awesome hun...
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Bunni on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:06:14 PM AEST
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| Loved it, loved it. It was very good and I enjoyed it a lot. It was an interesting read and I'm glad I clicked on the link. |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:29:58 PM AEST
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| OMG. Nessa, this was totally an awesome write. It was beautiful. It really tugs at the heart strings. I loved it. Keep penning on my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:11:39 PM AEST
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I am in awe of this poem.You have great talent,you express your emotions so well.I loved every verse of this poem,I'm stunned as well,I would say more than your poem is beautiful,but I don't think it's necessary considering the beauty contained in it is far from any words I could ever use to describe it.Beautiful,absolutely beautiful-
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Re: my candlelight flame'
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:14:29 PM AEST
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My god this makes me want to cry. What a writter you are. I wanna go back and never leave that place you write about here. you my friend are the agenuine rticle. This is just devine. My heart is racing and i'm ready to board that train to yesterday.
((((Nessa))))
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