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I Am Forever
Contributed by
doug
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:40:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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breath of eternity
twilight of destiny
on the footsteps of the stars
I am forever
master of reality
god of immorality
can you see where...
you stop and I begin
can you feel my eyes
as I'm crawling through the sky
your a castle made of sand
and I am the ocean
so take my hand child
we'll leave the future behind
breath the stardust from my lips
I am forever
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doug
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2004-03-25 00:40:45]
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Re: I Am Forever
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by arden on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:55:51 AM AEST
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ohh this was good! wow really nice i loved this. well written. good job
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Re: I Am Forever
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by emphaticplacebo on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:23:16 PM AEST
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| awesome write! its very ballad-esque, if you get my drift, like you could put music to it and have a good song :) I enjoyed reading it, and hope to hear more of your work :) |
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Re: I Am Forever
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by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:41:35 AM AEST
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wow this is very good.
so take my hand child
we'll leave the future behind
breath the stardust from my lips
I am forever
god i love that
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