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dance to a new song
Contributed by
mercedes
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The music plays softly
The lights are dimmed low
Our bodies entwined
Our movement so very slow
Our eyes locked together
So beautiful and round
Yours blue and sparkling
Mine a soft liquid brown
Lips gently caress
Bodies held tight
With you holding me close
I feel so free and light
Our passion builds a song at a time
Slowly your hands slid under my dress
Our breathing grows shallow
As I tilt my head up for your kiss
My hands work to slide your shirt off
My lips taste your naked skin
Your muscles tense, your breath sucked in
As a new song will soon begin
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2004-03-24 23:24:37]
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Re: dance to a new song
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:44:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I've read two poems tonight here that really touched my heart... this one and another by ladyfawn. This seems to echo my own feelings about my special guy... thanks for sharing your write!
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Re: dance to a new song
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:50:40 AM AEST
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| Very nice mercedes. I enjoyed this one rather well. Very soft and sensual write from you. |
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Re: dance to a new song
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by mountainhigh on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:58:33 AM AEST
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| The start of a beautiful dream, wonderful poem. Sweet memories in the dark night, thank you for sharing. |
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