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CONFESSION
Contributed by
Melika
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:58:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This pain in my heart
is taking over me
I really want to die
I dont deserve to breathe
The screaming voices in my head
are telling me to just hold on
but I strongly believe
things would be better if I were gone
My life was taken over
by this painful case of depression
and now Im writing on this paper
reviling my deepest confession
As tears fall on my paper
I think of all the pain inside
No one ever thought
I would have something to hide
They say they understand
and act like everythings allright
but they arent the ones
who have to put up with this fight
I dont really know
why I feel like this
but what I do know
is that I want to slit my wrists
I dont know why I should live
if I have a bad life
so now its just me,
the dark, and this knife
Copyright ©
Melika
... [
2004-03-24 22:58:24]
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Re: CONFESSION
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:29:31 PM AEST
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| very informative and nicely written. like all things, what you feel will change sooner or later. as long as you hold on, you will be okay in the end... |
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Re: CONFESSION
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by emphaticplacebo on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:26:28 AM AEST
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| very powerful and deep with emotion, I totally related to this poem. I hope to read more from you soon. |
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