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my perfect suicide
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:18:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I lie silently upon these endless shores, surrounded by stars as darkness slowly falls,
And I listen to the ocean move and crawl in so many beautiful, tumbling walls.
I close my eyes as a tear slowly falls and dies, and fills the water with my soul (together we cry)
Inhale (the sea rolls in…we breathe)
Exhale (we die)
I feel the oceans embrace my body in ways undefined, as I give myself so completely, our souls intertwined,
And I crave for my soul to be cleansed of all the impurities inside, all the pain I hide so far behind.
I watch the stars in the black night sky, and only wish that I could reach that high, that with broken wings I could still fly
Inhale (the sea rolls in…we breathe)
Exhale (we die)
I lie within such a perfect pool of tears, iridescent shimmers in my soul for so many thousands of years,
And I lose myself to these eternal moans and sighs, as my life is washed away under beautiful skies
So many worlds in such innocent eyes, such a gentle, lonely desire…my perfect suicide
Inhale (the sea rolls in…we breathe)
Exhale (we die)
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Re: my perfect suicide
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by bleeding_chains on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:27:59 AM AEST
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| this poem is excellent |
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Re: my perfect suicide
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:46:10 PM AEST
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dearest lucie, everything you write is so beautiful, your ending is fantastic, ...this is so sad though hon, big huggies n' big love nessa xxx...
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Re: my perfect suicide
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:07:48 AM AEST
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wow this was beautiful... I am unable to say ne thing else.
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Re: my perfect suicide
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by Queen_Dolly on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:00:05 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful..
I am amazed! =)
It's perfect..
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Re: my perfect suicide
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:22:35 PM AEST
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this is beautiful lucie.. as are you...
please dont be sad..
im sorry for hurting you.. im so sorry, i wish i could take it all back..
xxx |
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