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Dont Talk
Contributed by
SAT
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:33:58 PM in AEST
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he said he'd give her the world
but instead he took it away
he said he'd give her his love
but it belongs to someone else
if only he knew how she feels
but he doesnt and never will
he needs to wake up and live life
dump his barbie doll girl friend
and love her for who she is
im sick of all of this *****
take a look around and think
why are you here
and then think about her
her eyes and her wonderful hair
you used to play with it
but now you can never play with it again
because it is too late now
and he cant help her make up her mind
because whats done is done
and he cant help her anymore
because she has helped herself
and she doesnt have any chances left
to make her life different
because she doesnt have a life anymore
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2004-03-24 16:33:58]
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Re: Dont Talk
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:41:26 PM AEST
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nice poem you should be a poet when u grow up from ur close friend
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Re: Dont Talk
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:25:25 AM AEST
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HURTING YOURSELF DOES SUCK,I USED TO DO IT TO! ALL IT DOES IS BRING YOU MORE PAIN,JUST ANOTHER THING YOU HAVE TO HIDE FROM THE WORLD!! YOU WROTE THIS POEM REALLY WELL & IT DESCRIBES JUST HOW GREAT OF A FRIEND YOU CAN BE,SHE'S LUCKY!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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