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Inside Nowhere
Contributed by
liquidchaos
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I can't escape
I can't break free
Not worth your time
Don't bother saving me.
I'll weigh you down
I've lost my mind
Just a hinderance
I can't hold on this time.
Why can't I be normal?
Why does this hurt?
Can't overcome this paranoia
Or these shadows that lurk.
Behind every corner
Behind every closed door
I want to break free
But I chose to ignore
You begged and pleaded
I told you to leave
I know you won't return
I can't embrace reality.
Now it's gone
And I've abandoned all hope
You can't save me now
I can no longer cope.
No one waiting at the exit
I can't find it anywhere
Still lost inside my own head
Stuck inside nowhere.
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liquidchaos
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2004-03-24 15:30:40]
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Re: Inside Nowhere
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by doug on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:43:25 PM AEST
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this poem really hit me deep, its good cause it really shows the emotion of the thing but it really hit to close to home for me. I hope a lot of people read this so they can understand what it like to go through something like that.
anyways really good work, your friend doug |
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Re: Inside Nowhere
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:44:33 PM AEST
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| liquid, that was very deep, you put a lot of emotion into it. very good job expressing yourself :) |
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Re: Inside Nowhere
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by pinkashes on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:43:35 PM AEST
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| hey girl, this is really good, i've never read it before. anyways, keep going. i'm really proud of you. love you always, ashley |
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