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She looks on..
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:27:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She looks to the sun
Her clouds of misery close in
She doesn't know where she is
She doesn't know who she is
She looks at the ground
Her broken shards of happiness laid down
She's not quite sure where she is
She's not quite sure who she is
She looks to the moon
Her mists of love rain down
She knows where she is
She knows who she is...
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Re: She looks on..
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:46:05 PM AEST
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| very simple with lots of emotions. sometimes i feel exactly like this. thank you for sharing |
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Re: She looks on..
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by alecfernadez on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:15:10 PM AEST
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| this is really good, the simplicity simply (tounge twister) makes your emotions more visible and not hidden behind massive unnecessary words as what you want to say can be said without them, this creates more power, and emotion and makes this poem worth readin |
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