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Not, Worth My
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My feet
touch the sidewalk
one after the other
and another excuse,
for you to follow,
your green hair fluttering in the breeze.
You bump into me, rub
against me,
on tiptoes,
no stilletos,
do you think I don't know? You,
chewing the gum I've squished
undr my seat...
My shorts dissapeared
one gym class.
As the golden sunlight stretches lazily
through the branches,
the grass shimmers green,
I see you hiding behind that tree,
skittering, ducking, weaving, dodging,
you follow me home.
But, you see,
so cliche
little lost puppy,
you choke on your collar,
so pathetic
and
you are not worth
my time.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-03-24 15:27:10]
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Re: Not, Worth My
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:47:35 PM AEST
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| i like your style of writing. its very different but it makes you wanna read more and more. good job angel... cant wait to see more. |
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Re: Not, Worth My
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by doug on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:48:27 PM AEST
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| hmmm if you give them this poem im sure they'll get the point . good writing , really enjoyed it , doug |
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Re: Not, Worth My
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:32:43 AM AEST
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| you have strange ways of descibing things. its very clever. i love it. good write *hugs* phil xxx |
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