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I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:22:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Did I tell you how much I loved You?
Your heart next to mine, feeling it anew!
Did you hear me each time I whispered.
"You are my life, you made me feel so honored!"
Discouraged, did I encourage lovingly?
You were always so kind, I felt comfy.
Your eyes gentle with care and goodness.
My eyes, could you discern my happiness?
Each moment together, did I tell you often
I adore you, you are my heart's sun to brighten!
Each time you returned, did I squeeze you tightly?
Did you know I missed you so, my best buddy?
Appreciating so much 'twas love you taught me
Did I learn well, returning love to you dearly?
Time steals away moments so preciously defined.
N'er did I turn away, my love declined?
One breathe, one moment, one second, you're gone.
Oh! Please Dear God hold my heart, his life's withdrawn!
May I hold you one last time, can you still hear?
"I loved you so much, to me, you were so dear!"
A day, a month, a year, a moment a second or two.
Someone you love, someone you adore, value.
"So Much I Love You!" whisper in their ear softly.
Treacherous time steals our loves away sadly!
Created especially
for my dear friend Rita
March 24, 2004
"Loving hugs for all those that grieve....
My heart feels your grief too!"
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"Beginning today, treat everyone you meet as
if they were going to be dead by midnight.
Extend to them all the care, kindness, and
understanding you can muster, and do it with
no thought of any reward. Your life will never
be the same again!"
~Og Mandin~
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lovingcritters
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2004-03-24 15:22:36]
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by doug on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:36:06 PM AEST
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| a very touching poem with a very good message. loved the fifth paragragh and loved the message at the end. take care and may you walk in peace and happiness, your friend doug |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by Dying_Angel on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:43:14 PM AEST
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| your poem was so sweet i relly liked it |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:47:10 PM AEST
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| This touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. I try to say it often but I admit sometimes I slack on it. Thank you for reminding me ConSue. Kie |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:50:09 PM AEST
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| that hit home for me like i think it will for a lot of people. great job critter i cant wait for the next installment. lol ;) |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:54:28 PM AEST
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This is a lovely reminder to acknowledge the fact that you do love them and they are important in your life. Life can end so quickly. With the hectic lifestyle today I am afraid we all forget it sometimes in the hurry scurry of the day. I love you, my dear friend.
Rita |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 07:50:48 PM AEST
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dearest connie, your right life is precarious and we never really know do we? for so many reasons this poem reminds me of the last night i saw my husband alive, im so grateful right this minute we said our i love yous and shared kisses, i cant imagine how i would feel today if we hadnt, big hugs n' lotsa love, nessa
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:17:18 PM AEST
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hI MOM,
vERY SAD BUT VERY TRUE
Great advise 'cause one never knows.
Luv, huggs,
your brat,
emy |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by rita2344 on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:15:40 PM AEST
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That was an awesome poem. So true..I am glad that you wrote it. Your poems always inspire me. You took the words right out of my mouth. Thanks. You are the best.
RITA2344 |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:58:44 PM AEST
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| Yes My husband & I never go a day without saying it! I also tell my children at least three four times a day! My son tells me about every hour! LOL! Its the most important words to hear! Christina |
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:14:29 AM AEST
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I LOVED THIS POEM SO MUCH! WHAT A BEAUTIFUL WAY TO WRITE IT!! YOU HAVE SO MUCH HEART,LIKE ONE FOR EVERY STATE OF BEING!!! YOU DID AN EXCELLENT
JOB!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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by silent on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:06:34 AM AEST
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Love the poem as it's all too true. good way to end it with the last statment, very nicely done.
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:17:47 PM AEST
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So real, so true, so capitvatingly done. Words spliced together seamlessly.
Stitch |
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Re: I LOVED YOU SO MUCH!
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by silent on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 10:30:34 AM AEST
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A very true and touching poem. I love the way you speak through your poetry.
Thank you for everything...
WIth love,
Silent |
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