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she is banished to the autumn garden
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:16:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I`m sensing silent wind
rushing past,
while grabbing
a part of me in its leap
Drenched with doubt
I stare upon the nothing,
as I swiftly leave for its keep
Though I surely could live
without a useless part,
I`m waiting for a vacant seat
in the Autumn garden
where we all
will be sent to join
among lifeless, lonely ones
where our hearts won`t burst
and break so soon
Leaves are fallen
and they whisper before me
Without a movement by lips,
weary, they cry,
as the fall from their mother-branch
has wounded the sky
So lonely spinster, mother bright
I beg you to soak some sleep
this night
So your strength can keep up
with this sorrowly sight
of bursting hearts, breaking still
in the corner of my broken windowsill
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2004-03-24 13:16:34]
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Re: she is banished to the autumn garden
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:33:25 PM AEST
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| vivid images, very pretty, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: she is banished to the autumn garden
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by arden on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:34:20 PM AEST
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Very beautiful vivid images. nicely done good work keep it up.
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Re: she is banished to the autumn garden
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by Lee on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:18:04 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
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Wonderful translation of imagery in this poem!
Good combination of rhymed verse and free verse.
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