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Broken Heart
Contributed by
silent
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 09:41:37 AM in AEST
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As I look at you, so beautiful and free
So graceful, yet unhappy, how can that be
Kindness and compassion for a world so cold
Hiding in despair, with no-one to hold
Your father unknown, yet loved so much
Why did you leave me, never keep in touch
To see your sweet face, would mean the world to me
Set the shadows my mind has, eternally free
But alas I am lost, with despair as my friend
Won’t be much longer, I feel near the end
I love you mum, we were once so close
My best friend you were, you loved me the most
I watch destruction take hold, with demons of mind
Destroyed in the flames, of your horrible time
Please let me help you, your pain is so vast
Quick, grasp my hand, before fate has been cast
Self-destruction from drugs and violent men
Depression sets in and I've lost you again
Mum, please I love you, why can't you see
Open your eyes, feel for me
Your love trapped behind an unbreakable wall
Glass one at that, the most painful of all
My sister I love you, seeing your pain
Self-destruction takes place, God no, not again
Pain so intense, I can't take any more
Maybe I'll end it, just lie on the floor
Images of peace conjured up with a knife
Soon pain will be gone, I'll take my own life
Still hanging on, with a thread of hope
Hoping no-one ties yet, my life ending rope
Uncle, you understand my pain
Please help me to heal, take it away
Come with me child, I shall show you a sight
Up to the mountains, so beautiful tonight
Feeling my uncle's warm stare
Starts to warm my broken heart, for at last, someone cares
Into the car, we look around, I hear then, a soul destroying sound
Looking into your eyes, I see the devil once more
Come here you say, "Nasty little whor*"
Why is he following me, my best friend again
I freeze up, I cannot be hurt, I scream not again
Please don't, I beg with tears in my eyes, pleading to stop, but get no replies
Uncle I was so innocent, young and loving, you took that from me
Destroyed my soul, you killed me
Corrupted my mind, please God why, I cry and cry and die inside
Drifting through life with a numbness of pain
Friends soon I find, understanding, in a way
Now I find out, they were using me
Everyone's *****
Friends comfort, sadistic comfort, showing the way
To the end of my life, gone too far astray
Take me from this world, my innocence destroyed
Sweet eyes of love, replaced with black voids
Finding comfort in despair and unhappiness
Don't worry about me, I am okay, you don't really give a ***** anyway
I am unlovable and pathetic, with no self esteem
Why do I need any, I'll never be seen
For the beautiful girl who once was
Now seen through those eyes as an object of lust
Hurting feels good, so beautiful and free
Bloodied cuts like rivers, calling out to me
I hurt myself to take it away, but the pain never leaves, always stays
***** I'll end it, I'm gone anyway . . .
I meet someone then who, gently, takes my hand
Helps me to heal, to understand
Restored to me my love
Taking so long, healing immense, I get through
We both do . . .
I will go on, the world will not stop me
I feel happy and alive now
But underneath lies a box
Key thrown away
Never to be found
Some things are better left unopened . . .
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-03-24 09:41:37]
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Re: Broken Heart
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by doug on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:27:35 AM AEST
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| i like it and after all that despair it ends it seems on a positive note. nice work, your friend doug |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:34:44 AM AEST
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absolutely a powerful write. I know this may sound trite but God loves you. Keep writing , it helps the soul to heal...
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Darkness shall not always be
For the morning comes when all will see
God has gathered your tears in love
And treasures them forever
In heaven above
Hold on a little longer...Russ |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:24:21 PM AEST
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very well written tugs at the heartstrings...
so glad you found someone who showed you the wonders you hold within...for we are all worthy of love and God does hold us close
shari |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:00:26 PM AEST
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you have an amazing way of words. it is nice to see you channel your pain in a productive way. God is with you always and he has evidently given you the gift of painting pictures with words. continue healing and write all the time. it helped me through some rough times as well.
~rae |
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Re: Broken Heart
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by arden on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:09:59 PM AEST
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this was one powerful poem. i can relate to this alot.
the way you expressed this with your words was just so amazing.
i really am speechless.
just a wonderful write. i loved it. keep up the awesome work because you have a great talent.
Arden |
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