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Transparent Girl
Contributed by
DoubleONate
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:16:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My life is nothing but a WORTHLESS MESS,
Full of hope but OVERCOME BY DISTRESS,
Living a LIFE WITHOUT MEANING,
Wishing I'd wake from all of this dreaming,
Knowing I'LL NEVER FIND THAT GIRL to calm my fears,
MAKES ME SAD and come to tears,
To have her, to hold her, to let her know I'm here,
As long as I am near, I'll always hold her dear,
Just so she can understand my UNSUCCESSFUL LIFE,
To stop me, to keep me from PICKING UP THAT KNIFE,
But this isTOO MUCH TO ASK FOR you see,
I'LL NEVER FIND THAT GIRL to tell me she loves nobody else but me.
Copyright ©
DoubleONate
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2004-03-24 05:16:44]
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Re: Transparent Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:37:41 AM AEST
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| if only someone like you lived in maui...lol |
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Re: Transparent Girl
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:53:36 AM AEST
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Oh So Sad..
But Yet A Great Write..
Hang In There That
Perfect Girl Will Show Up
You'll See. {{{ Hugs }}}
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Transparent Girl
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by bluoreo on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:10:19 AM AEST
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I really like the write Nathan. Great title (laughs). Everything will work out some day......trust me.
-bluoreo (eric) |
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Re: Transparent Girl
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:51:24 PM AEST
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:-| you remind me so much of me...(cept im not a guy)...don't give up man she'll show up...don't let go of all hope yet...i felt jus like you do...and i found my perfect guy...just be pateint...
Great, sad poem.
-WWD |
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Re: Transparent Girl
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 10:38:49 PM AEST
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Aww,God had a special plan for you and judging by your faith and your heart,that girl will surely come to you,just remember that God knows the right time and maybe that time isn't right for you now.Nicely expressed,
PumpkinPie |
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