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No Need To Rush
Contributed by
faithmairee
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:00:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When i was a child
i dreamed of being free
spending hours thinking
what i could be
now, many years behind me
my thoughts remain the same
and i haven't changed my name
but there are some things
better left to someone who knows
there's no need to rush it
rushing only causes pain
you told me you'd meet me
at second and st. clair
and when you didn't anyhow
were you sure i'd be there
sometimes it's hard to wait
sometimes it's better to be late
say, who wants to watch the tents go up
or the circus clowns coming down
honey, it's been said before
honey, don't you know
it goes both ways
some people sleep until morning
some people sleep all day
some people fight for freedom
some say it doesn't pay
oh, nobody wins at every game
and there's no need to rush it
rushing only causes pain
Copyright ©
faithmairee
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2004-03-24 05:00:10]
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Re: No Need To Rush
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:14:33 AM AEST
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dearest faith, this is softly charming, powerful and oh so pretty, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: No Need To Rush
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:14:08 AM AEST
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Very Beautiful Write
So Pretty
Loved It....
,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,, |
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Re: No Need To Rush
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:25:34 AM AEST
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| I really enjoy reading reflective poems. I always learn something or see anothers perspectives. From the title to the ending, I thought this poem was excellent. Well done. Kie |
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Re: No Need To Rush
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 11:24:58 AM AEST
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| A measured and reflective heart I see in this poem . A beautiful thing...Russ |
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Re: No Need To Rush
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:04:12 PM AEST
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Amen to last stanza! Great awesome write!
Anne :D |
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