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Accursed
Contributed by
venkat
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:52:10 AM in AEST
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My dear lioness, can you eat my flesh
But not my mind and thought each minute
Drink my blood, but do smile at me please
Don’t shed crocodile tears ‘fore tearing me
Into pieces, when you eat each day a piece
From my heart, don’t you show some pity?
I don’t see even a flash of smile on your face
Is this my fate? Why do you say you love me
So much and would live only for my sake?
Oh, what a fool I am to walk into your lair
Accursed I was, please finish this farce
Let me sleep in peace even for a minute!
24-3-2004
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venkat
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Re: Accursed
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:03:31 AM AEST
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dearest venkat this is most excellent, i love it in its simplistic amazing beauty, what a powerful poem, bravo! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Accursed
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:09:58 AM AEST
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this is a very good study in the feelings of human emotion of looking for an ending......it is a sad and desperate call if one should hear it. you have found a soft spot in me venkat, i like this one a lot.
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Re: Accursed
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by MOTOXRCR on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:12:25 AM AEST
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| Very powerful words, they invoke a lot of imagery and thought... |
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Re: Accursed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:40:04 AM AEST
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Venkat, this is a very beautiful piece of work yet poignantly distressing. Innocence being devoured.
Rita |
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Re: Accursed
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:53:48 AM AEST
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| This poem speaks volumes ... and I'm truly captivated by this write venkat ... awesome ... Jan |
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Re: Accursed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:48:54 AM AEST
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Very gory but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for all your comments on my work. I do so appreciate u-n-your work. |
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Re: Accursed
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:11:51 AM AEST
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This is simply beautiful and vulnerable. I love it.
Hur |
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Re: Accursed
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:19:24 AM AEST
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Excellent , totally wonderful write
loved it....keep up the great work
,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Accursed
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:54:44 AM AEST
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another well written piece
Shari |
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Re: Accursed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 07:08:13 AM AEST
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Food for thought!! Interesting piece..
Jenni |
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Re: Accursed
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 08:40:45 AM AEST
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This is one of the most " human " writes you have penned and I loved it.
Very well done
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Re: Accursed
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:32:13 PM AEST
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| I read this poem twice and each time it hit me powerfully. I liked this writing style alot and hope to see another soon. Well done. Kie |
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Re: Accursed
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:43:56 AM AEST
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Wow what a touching poem! Really accursed! Awesome poem! Written magnificently!
Anne :D |
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Re: Accursed
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by arden on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 11:54:15 PM AEST
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ohh this is awesome! wowy so good. i loved it! wonderfully written. another great write.
Arden |
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Re: Accursed
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by thumper on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:05:37 AM AEST
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WOW! This is deep! I'm glad I'm not in the speakers shoes! Good one venkat.
Peace Friend,
Thumps ;0) |
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Re: Accursed
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by kalika_vidya on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 03:55:08 AM AEST
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| I'm sad to read this..how did you write this very dark chilling one. |
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Re: Accursed
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:41:16 AM AEST
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i just don't know what to say about your poetry, everyone i reads the same excellent! you have an amazing mind.
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