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Collide on Film
Contributed by
merry
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:57:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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rusty soup cans
prominent decorations
on the front lawn
wobbling bicycle wheels
cracks in the sidewalk
cry for repair
hot wind blows
down the alleyway
leaving me alone
in the barrio
stifling memories
slow motion
captures the essence
of time and place
collide on film
in the late afternoon
red orange sun
burns up the street
it's a wrap.....
Copyright ©
merry
... [
2004-03-23 22:57:36]
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Re: Collide on Film
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:03:26 PM AEST
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| You summarized the Hollywood world well enough. :) |
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Re: Collide on Film
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:21:06 PM AEST
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excellent!! brilliant!! *taps foot waiting for movie to release* lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Collide on Film
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:28:18 PM AEST
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It amazes me that every time I read your writes I see everything in my mind sooo clearly. Your pen is magic Gaille, truly.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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