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SWEET RETREAT
Contributed by
rhymeandreason
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Your like some exotic sugar,
that's been twice refined.
Thoughts of you,
so sweet, so tasty,
and always on my mind.
I want the sugar that's yours.
You know I need a taste.
Of a sweetness that I know
I can't replace.
I want to find your sweet retreat.
I need to find your sweet retreat.
I'd love to find your sweet retreat.
That's all that's on my mind.
Don't be stingy, with your sweets.
Don't keep them from my sight.
I want to taste,
I need to taste those special treats,
every day, yes every day and night.
So now I've got
this sugar need,
and it is growing every day.
On your lips,
that's where I need to feed,
till sugar blues are blown away.
Copyright ©
rhymeandreason
... [
2004-03-23 22:55:58]
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Re: SWEET RETREAT
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:38:58 PM AEST
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| Well you obviously have a sweet tooth! Loved this one and thought it had a bluesie quality to it. I think it would make great lyrics. Another great write by you! Kie |
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Re: SWEET RETREAT
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:40:15 AM AEST
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| cute lol, also sweetly written; no pun intended, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: SWEET RETREAT
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:31:53 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: SWEET RETREAT
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:07:58 AM AEST
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| Mmmm very naughty, but nice, loved this poem ... Jan |
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