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Mirror Image
Contributed by
blueheart
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:11:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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This mirrored image stands before me,
Thoughts developing from what I see,
This soul I inspect with scrutiny.
I am the star, the sky has left behind,
I am the presence that lingers on your mind,
These words I speak are spoken like a mime,
I am the wounds that barely heal with time,
I am an uncut diamond waiting to shine.
I am the imperfection all plated in gold,
I am the solace battering your soul,
I am the vulnerability that never grows old,
I am but a corpse, so lifeless and cold,
I am the flaw keeping you whole.
I am the innocence that left as it came,
I am the voice ensuring you're sane,
I am the chance you missed yet again,
I am stardust that sweeps away from fame,
I am deep gashes leaving you in pain.
I am the beauty you will never see,
I am myself and that has set me free.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2004-03-23 21:11:36]
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:20:42 PM AEST
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You dont post often here my friend, but each one you share with us is a true jewel. This is an amazing write.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:21:00 PM AEST
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hanna this is beautifully vivid and full of images that just touch my heart, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Mirror Image
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:06:23 PM AEST
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Great Write...
Loved It.. Hope To Read More
Of Your Poems Keep Em Coming..
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:26:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful... just beautiful... so vivid with images... ahhh... LOVED IT!! It really touched my heart... Keep writing and posting... would love to read more from u...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:00:50 AM AEST
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| Beautiful imazery..lovely poem..venkat |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:06:19 AM AEST
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You sho got my two thumbs up!
This is a masterpeice in any one's eye's.
There really arn't enuff words to give this one praise.
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Mirror Image
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:35:39 AM AEST
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I love this!! Very uplifting, inspiring write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:41:02 AM AEST
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| enjoyed reading this -very honest! you have a excellent way with words |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by mountainhigh on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 07:13:06 AM AEST
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| You are by far the definate star, beautiful poetry that leaves one wanting so much more. Thank you, add another fan to that long list. |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by silent on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:42:22 AM AEST
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beautiful write. I love the last two lines
A true gem. |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:53:56 PM AEST
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Wonderful unique stanzas. I love it. I have a poem that has something like it. Lovely.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:37:51 AM AEST
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| Wow. That was amazing, to say the least. I've always loved the concept of the mirror being able to reflect us in so many ways other than physically. Well done. |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Justalady on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:15:46 PM AEST
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And your pen is the instrument that allows us the ability to see a beautiful image of you and your work.
Justalady |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:54:08 PM AEST
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| An ode to self reflection, a stark stark poem. Very insightful but rather ghastly sad in essence. But in the end..oh joy! the tenure of self acceptance..the passport to freedom and th ekeys to greater things...Nice write indeed refreshingly human. |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 05:27:57 AM AEST
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| You are such a great poet! I love this poem because it sounds so personal. Thanks for sharing this poem. cya! |
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 07:04:29 AM AEST
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you have an amazing talent! this was absolutely breathtaking!
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Re: Mirror Image
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:26:06 PM AEST
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| This is wonderful for so many reasons. Incredibly well written, insightful, intelligent, thought provoking, honest.... Wow. Amazingly well done!!!!!!! |
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