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This poem is for you
Contributed by
Chilibear
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:32:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Because you didn't love me,
This poem is for you.
Because you care no more,
Here's what i have to do.
My love is lost with the times,
All the times you weren't there,
When I imagined you beside me,
Now you're gone...
And this i cannot bear.
Because you said you'd never leave,
I actually thought it was meant to be.
But now I can see,
There's no reason left for me.
Because....
When i look back tomorrow,
It'll seem like just a dream....
To think you said you loved me,
And to think that I believed.
Copyright ©
Chilibear
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2004-03-23 17:32:31]
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Re: This poem is for you
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:35:16 PM AEST
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"believe in what you want..." well, good write... on the topic - take care and don't let the sun go down on your anger... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: This poem is for you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 06:14:46 PM AEST
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| Good stuff, I like it. Thanks for sharing!! |
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Re: This poem is for you
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:51:54 PM AEST
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| well you know, everyone dreams at certain point of their lifes, some are fairytales, some are only tragdies, some ends too quick and left a heartache, some drags too long until it reach the point of no returns.... I think, at least you should be glad that you wake from it soon enough before it is too late, and find the better reality in S***n's arms, just enjoy what you have..... |
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Re: This poem is for you
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by badlander on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:19:54 AM AEST
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Don't know why people do what they do to each other,but at least you got in the last word.Good write, I like it!!
tony |
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