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NEVER SURRENDER
Contributed by
stinger
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:28:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The heart that is locked tight
Need never know of pain
The mind that does not question
Will never go insane
Yet robbed of joy and even sorrow
Tears of both are never shed
To go on living in this shell
You may as well be dead
For life is pain and it is sorrow
But love,too, can abound
Just stop awhile...,
Just close your eyes...,
Your heart has it's own sound
Copyright ©
stinger
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2004-03-23 17:28:48]
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Re: NEVER SURRENDER
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:31:07 PM AEST
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almost sounds like you've been reading some church hill... good strong write, awesome! ;0)
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Re: NEVER SURRENDER
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by kayald on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:42:05 PM AEST
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wow, this is a really solid poem...there was nothing i didnt like about it...good write
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