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Boundaries

Contributed by daniel on Wednesday, 18th September 2002 @ 04:57:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

don't corner me in this place, i have issues
consistently painting up my face, i wish i would
know what to make from this, so unconventional
you are not just in your kiss, more dimensional
this mass array becomes...

i know what we need, it makes perfect sense
but i don't know you see, i can't make any sense
now i can't trust any one, it needs to be right
i need to find just that one, i pray that i might
get more help than some...

i try, i fail, i get back right up again
i lie, mistake, repent revamp to a certainty
i go, blindly, knowing little use of when
immense, silence, creeps in a new profanity

a chilling haunted soul is not ultimate perfection
but further down this hole that part of me is resurrected
when by the byline of this dream is a little piece yelling
i gave him up when i didn't need him to be telling
what storms about will come...

an overcautious careful creature even crosses borders
i know that's not the main feature but it's in order
where we step down synchronized watch our footprints
staying in boundaries personalized giving hints
of where we should be from...

i chance, loosely, foresee a harder downfall
i dance, i break, hope to know where i'm going
i go, blindly, it makes me feel so small
immense, silence, tells all of what i'm knowing

***
(9/17/02)

Copyright © daniel ... [ 2002-09-18 16:57:40]
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Re: Boundaries (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 06:12:09 AM AEST
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HI DANIEL,
THIS IS A GOOD WRITE.

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