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Dust
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:41:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You left me in your dust.
Lost within your splendour's shadow.
Crystalline tears of hushed lust cease the flow of blood.
Across my pale-white wrists.
Leaving scars and rifts within a crumbled past.
Never lost, never fading.
I dwell within.
I am but an image of the valour you create.
Never knowing my defeat.
You tarry on in innocence.
Darkening hope so fragile and sublime.
Hope, more precious than the rarest jewels.
More pure than the finest pearls.
Which once dwelt in the calm and soothing waters.
The wellsprings of life and the lush, spring meadows.
Now dwelleth in the barren feilds of dust you leave behind.
Dwelling in your victory I find myself alone.
Mourning what will never come.
Longing to be relevent in your life so valiant.
I am nothing.
Nothing but reflections of forgotten love.
Copyright ©
SkYYBLu
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2004-03-23 16:41:09]
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Re: Dust
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:43:54 PM AEST
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oh wow... this is gorgeous, stop-skipped my heartstrings! beautiful write. ;0)
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Re: Dust
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:01:11 PM AEST
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Im amazed that you dont have more post's then you do.. i thurly enjoyed your write.. rips your heart out and make you realize whats going on.. i hope you overcome what source of light you dont have in your soul..
keep up the great work
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Re: Dust
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 11:41:53 AM AEST
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heart wrenching, emotive expressions, stunning imagery and comparisons.
Crestfallen, delicate, whisps, gentle-still within the discomfort of your emotions.
i loved it.
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