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The Need to Bleed
Contributed by
unprettyxsongbird
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:28:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sometimes I forget
What it is to remember
Sometimes I'm more dead than alive
I know it isn't me
But when I see you
Every time a part of me dies
And it's then
In that eternal second
Then
When I feel the
Need to bleed
The need to bleed
And you're gone
Sometimes I think
That part of me has left
Maybe I can start living now
But always in the end
It is who I am
Another little piece of me dies
And it's then
In that immortal instant
Then
When I feel the
Need to bleed
The need to bleed
And you're gone
Could anyone love a girl
Who's too damn sad to care?
Could anyone love a girl
Who isn't really there?
And it's then
In that undying heartbeat
Then
When I feel the
Need to bleed
The need to bleed
And you're gone
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Re: The Need to Bleed
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:58:45 PM AEST
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and then what? lol, wow... it's like one thing is always leading to the next one! i like this write, good stuff! ;0)
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Re: The Need to Bleed
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:43:57 PM AEST
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| this is amazing... |
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Re: The Need to Bleed
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by IneedLove on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:55:52 PM AEST
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| That was great. I reall y injoyed that. Please feel free to email me! |
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Re: The Need to Bleed
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:00:29 AM AEST
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| Awsome!!! Lovin' the structure ya used!!! Oh so awsome!! rockin' poem. Keep it up!!! |
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