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Blurred sense of Beauty
Contributed by
apollo
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:31:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Speaking of my burning eyes,
my spectacles of beauty and horror.
Plagued by this opposition of this outer view.
Beauty in mere terms of Ex versus Internal.
Are these eyes deceiving?
Although what has been given,
a blurred mystery of decency.
I must retain some composure,
although these lies I proclaim deceive me.
I mustn't allow jealousy to provoke my raging matter.
Continue I must, through this trudge of quicksand,
ever sinking remains of this mortal.
For why have I been given infinite chances?
How much longer will my eyes view beauty?
I can already sense these very eyes
burning a hole in my mind.
Copyright ©
apollo
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2004-03-23 15:31:02]
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Re: Blurred sense of Beauty
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:56:16 PM AEST
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| dearest apollo, i do not know what i would do if i lost my eyesight, hopefully i will always have my inner sight as do you, your soul is beautiful, this poem is very honest and heartfelt, my best to you, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Blurred sense of Beauty
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:47:30 PM AEST
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| A heartfelt poem. The title reminded me of my own poem "Blurred Innocence'. :) |
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Re: Blurred sense of Beauty
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by Funkdoob on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 03:26:39 PM AEST
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| It's beautiful. I think your use of words really captures the emotion, i think, you were trying to describe. I felt involved in the poem, and felt i had to read it a few more times. Keep it up and dont ever change your style of writing. It's pure. |
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