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Sorrow of a Ghost
Contributed by
kellros
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:07:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Haunted by this mansion is a spectre,
a deep cry of sorrow is heard every night,
for her last breath was there,
tis' was her last night
A creeking gate,
thunder and lightning,
a window flapping,
a cry through the years,
the sorrow of a loved one,
was to harsh for these ears
Now staring out the window,
no shade is cast from this ghost,
an endless wail of sorrow,
and death's last breath.
A curtain torn, an evening gown,
blood spilled, dripped from thy' dagger,
a puddle of blood, the stench of decay,
a figure which once was, is no more.
Now the spectre haunts this house,
forever more
Copyright ©
kellros
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2004-03-23 14:07:53]
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Re: Sorrow of a Ghost
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by AliB on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST
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Oooooo!!!! Very good, wanna go watch a scary movie now, well done.
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Re: Sorrow of a Ghost
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:50:29 PM AEST
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| chillingly vivid images ... oooo even! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sorrow of a Ghost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 10:53:41 PM AEST
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Loved it! This piece sent chills down my spine! Great write. ; 0 )
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Re: Sorrow of a Ghost
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by Dawny on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:34:43 AM AEST
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Ohhh this one is chilly. Such vivid imagery, this is excellent well done
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